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Thinking of you...

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  Thinking of you...

When my world has stopped its turning,
and my strangled heart turns blue;
I close my eyes to settle down,
and turn my thoughts to you.

Last night I thought that I'd turned numb,
But then I had a dream.
(It made me want to wake up
to talk to you!, I mean).

In my dream we stood there
In a glasshouse in the sky,
and gazed out for a while;
To watch the birds go by.

They say, "when in a glasshouse,
you shouldn't speak too loud."
We screamed until our ears bled!--
and we plunged into the clouds.

It's such a happy feeling, knowing
that with a friend so true:
My days will always turn out better
When I'm thinking of you.
Sometimes a poem starts to come together when a title is decided on.

This was definately the case with this poem. I was asked to write a poem for a friend, and HERE IT IS!!! I'll give it to my friend as a welcome back present. :hug:

Comments welcome!

I think this is the first commission I've ever done.... ^^;
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Caspian107's avatar
I really like this one! :) very surreal